もしも僕がJR西日本の英語放送の作文を担当させていただけるのなら, 不自然な表現を排除してこうします!!というシリーズです。
駅間が短距離なので, できるだけ語数を少なくしてみました。
同じセリフをくりかえすと, 放送システムにうまくはまるようですので, できるだけコピペができるようにしていますが... 自動音声って作るの大変そうですね 。
近年, 実際に放送が導入されましたのであわせてご参照ください。
大阪→福島
Ladies and gentlemen, welcome to the Loop Line. This is a counterclockwise O train, service to Nishikujo, Bentencho, and Tennoji. Next stop: Fukushima.
This is Fukushima. Doors to the right.
・service to は for に置き換えられますが, 短い中でもおもてなし感を表現。
・次は/まもなくは2語 (2音節) でOK。丁寧さは欠けますが, 普通電車とはそのようなものです。
・出口案内はdoors to the right/left 。シンプルに短く。
福島→野田
This is a counterclockwise O train. Next stop: Noda.
This is Noda. Doors to the right.
野田→西九条
This is a counterclockwise O train. Next stop: Nishikujo.
This is Nishikujo. Doors to the right.
Universal Studios Japan passengers, please transfer to a P train.
Kansai Airport passengers: Kansai airport limited express Haruka (an S train) is available from this station with extra fare; an S rapid service train is also available with no extra fare.
Transfer is also available to Hanshin Namba line. Nishikujo station.
・主要駅では案内のあとに駅名をくりかえし。
西九条→弁天町
This is a counterclockwise O train, service to Bentencho, Tennoji, and Tsuruhashi. Next stop: Bentencho.
This is Bentencho. Doors to the left.
Transfer is available to the City Subway C trains.
・・・ちょっととばして・・・
今宮到着
This is Imamiya. Doors to the left. Transfer is available to the westbound Q train for JR Namba.
今宮→新今宮
This is a counterclockwise O train. Next stop: Shin Imamiya.
This is Shin Imamiya. Doors to the left. Transfer is available to the eastbound Q rapid and local services for Oji and Nara, also to the Nankai line.
新今宮→天王寺
This is a counterclockwise O train, service to Tennoji, Tsuruhashi, and Kyobashi. Next stop: Tennoji.
This is Tennoji. Doors to the right.
Transfer is available to the eastbound Q, southbound R and S trains; also to the City Subway M and T trains, and to the Hankai line.
Kansai Airport passengers: Kansai airport limited express Haruka (an S train) is available from this station with extra fare; an S rapid service train is also available with no extra charge.
Thank you for traveling with JR West. Tennoji Station.
・方角は入れたほうがよいです。counterclockwise (内回り), clockwise (外回り); 方角 + bound など。
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